Too gud...........aapki maturity saaf dikhayi deti hai .....Bahut hi khoobsurat kavita.......Jo aaj ke samaj ke vyavasayikaran par vyank kasti hai .......bahut hi uttam
Manas ji Namaste. Apki rachna padkar bahut achcha laga. bahut hi hasi main. Ummind hai age bhi isi tarah se likhkar patko ko hasate rahiyega.Agar kuch aur nayi rachna ho to pls meri email par zarur bhejiyega. Dhanyawad.
Too gud...........aapki maturity saaf dikhayi deti hai .....Bahut hi khoobsurat kavita.......Jo aaj ke samaj ke vyavasayikaran par vyank kasti hai .......bahut hi uttam
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ReplyDeleteNamaste.
Apki rachna padkar bahut achcha laga. bahut hi hasi main. Ummind hai age bhi isi tarah
se likhkar patko ko hasate rahiyega.Agar kuch aur nayi rachna ho to pls meri email par
zarur bhejiyega. Dhanyawad.
Thank.
Sunita
मानस जी आप की सारी कवितायेँ मर्म स्पर्श करती है । हूदयग्राह्य है । आप युवा जगत मेँ हलचल पैदा कर देँगे । माँ सरस्वती की कृपा आप पर है ।
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